Showing posts with label Week 6. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Week 6. Show all posts

Thursday, October 1, 2015

Week 6 Storytelling: Bhishma's fall

Image source: Bhishma Falls

Bhishma told his enemy the way to defeat him.

“If Arjuna shoots me when he is behind Shikhandi, Amba’s currently avatar, then I cannot do anything to fight back. Shikhandi was a female in his previous cycle, I would not hurt him.”

On day 10, Pandu let Shikhandi stand in front of the battle. And all the soldiers were charging to Bhishma under commander’s order. Bhishma killed countless enemies; however Shikhandi has approached Bhishma during the fight. Bhishma did not try to dodge Shikhandi’s attack, nor did he shoot one arrow to Shikhandi. 

“Maybe my time is coming. What a long epic journey it has been. I die today not because I am weak; I die today for my family, for my kingdom, and for my oath.” Bhishma told to himself.

Thus Bhishma stopped fighting with Arjuna. Arjuna destroy Bhishma’s bow and javelin. Then Bhishma took his sword and shield and wanted to jump down, attempting to fight on the ground. Arjuna nevertheless break Bhishma’s sword and shield, so all the soldiers started attacking Bhishma from all sides. Bhishma is finally defeated with uncountable arrows on his body, falling from his chariot in the setting sun. 

The war suddenly freeze and the sun is in shadow. Everyone’s heart was falling as Bhishma was falling. All the soldiers lower their heads in sadness. Commanders of both sides put their weapons off; they came to Bhishma with respect and saluted Bhishma solemnly. Bhishma’s body did not touch the ground as so many arrows in his body. He lied on the bed of arrow, which was the highest honor of a warrior.

Bhishma spoke to those who stood in front of him. “My head is not comfortable. Give me a warrior’s pillow!”

Some people brought few cushions, but Bhishma rejected for those were not warrior’s pillow. Then Arjuna took three arrows from his quiver and stuck them into ground. With the sharp arrowheads supporting his head, Bhishma said gladly.

“This is the pillow I want! Do not heal me. Let me die and burn me with these arrows.”
Pandus and Gurus were sitting together around Bhishma as guards. Kings saluted Bhishma with their most respect. 

“I am thirsty.” Bhishma said.

Some soldiers gave Bhishma water and food but Bhishma rejected them. Again, Arjuna understood Bhishma’s thought; he shot an arrow to the ground. The ground was split and water welled from ground to Bhishma’s mouth. 

End.

Author’s Notes:

I did not change the original storyline because I like Bhishma’s loyalty and good moral character. I focus on writing the scene after he is defeated on the battlefield. Two sides of the war respect Bhishma, and Bhishma accepted his fate as he died.

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Image: Bhishma on the bed of arrows. 

Tuesday, September 29, 2015

Reading Diary B:Public Domain Mahabharata

It would be a special feeling to read a mighty hero fails in a war.

I read Bhishma's failure in sorrow because I did not expect to see Bhishma died in battleground. And the reason he failed is his enemies knew Bhishma’s vow and they took advantage of it. In my opinion, this is a brazen tactic. However I read about Bhishma have the fate to die on that day. It might be normal in the setting of the story, but I dislike it. I think Bhishma is the hero who can control his fate, fight against his fate, and twist his fate.

I would write my storytelling beginning with Bhishma found he broke his oath. I would say Bhishma was unwilling to stop attacking, but he finally accepted his fate. Bhishma let himself killed to fulfill his vow, and his soul return to heaven.

Image source: Bhishma Falls

Monday, September 28, 2015

Reading Diary A:Public Domain Mahabharata

Draupadi and the Pandavas, her husband, in the forest.

In today’s reading, two stories interested me. One is the Lifein the Forest, and the other one is The Battle Begins.

Firstly the battle is epic. Bhishma is like a sharp spear in the war. Moreover, he gains power from his continuous victories; wherever Bhishma goes, he wins there. Bhishma is unstoppable. I may extend the fights with other heroes. However I noticed the part B of this week’s reading has a topic of Bhishma Falls. I cannot wait to read it, but I do not think I will write the battle ends with failure.

Although I am a fun of wars and fights, I love the forest life more. It gives me a brand new way to understand how to live in a forest. The ways they got food, drink, and living space are amazing. I want to write details of how they get those resources. I think they need to pray prior to take those resources.
I will finalized my idea about storytelling after reading part B.