Her car has been on fire. I have to get her out quickly
or she may die for severe burns. Despite the fire was burning me, I jumped into
the car from broken window and unfastened her seat belt. The door was hard to
open, so I used my legs to force the door open.
Fortunately, Billy is a large dog and I feed him very well,
otherwise I could not move this girl. We just ran away less than 50 yards, and the
car is completely burned up. She looked okay, but a lot of my dog hair was
burnt. When I touched my head, there was almost not hair on it. Fortunately,
the skin did not burn and I thought animal hair grows very fast.
Ambulance soon came; the girl was carried to the ambulance.
I was taken by a police car and we followed the ambulance to the hospital.
A nurse helped me a bath. After that I was waiting at the waiting area.
Three hours later, the girl came out.
“Lucy, you only have couple minor burns. I already cleaned them and I
think no additional treatment is needed,” said the doctor. “You dog saved you!
If you stayed in the car, you probably won’t die but most of your skin would have
to be replaced.”
“Wait, this is not my dog,” said Lucy confusedly. Then she hugged
and said to me gratefully. “Thank you so much for saving me! Your hair burned a
lot and you are still with me now!”
All of a sudden she noticed my collar.
“Here is his address. We live
very close. Shall we go home together? I have to thank your owner.” Lucy said
happily.
I was shocked for her hug because I have never been hugged by a girl
in my 26 years’ life. I suddenly came up with a thought.
“I do not want to be a human anymore!”
We went home together. When I approached my door, I realized
that I could not let Lucy see Billy in human body. I quickly ran into my house through
an open window and locked the door. Lucy knocked my door for a while and she
left a letter of thanks.
Billy did not wear pants and he looked very upset. When I checked
my fridge I found no food. I ordered a pizza for Billy for he was supposed to
eat human food.
As the pizza order was on the road, I tried to comfort Billy
in dog’s way. I licked Billy’s face and suddenly I realized that I returned in
my own body.
“I am very hungry!” I yelled.
When pizza arrived, I gave the delivery man a very nice tip
and started eating immediately. After dinner I recalled the moment I returned
to my body and I found the area of my face I licked had a mole there.
“This mole is very suspicious,” I said to Billy. “Should I
let you lick it again? No, forget it. What if I cannot switch back? I do not
want to be a dog forever.”
I opened my Facebook and I wanted to share this with my
friend. The old post was still laughed by many people. Then I found I got a
private message.
“Before you became a dog, your dog must have licked your
body. The place where the dog licked must have a mole. If you lick the mole
again, you will become a human again. Reply if you want to know more. Or delete
this message now for you safety.”
Author’s Note:
I write this story based on the 9th goblin I read from the TWENTY-TWO GOBLINS from this week. In the 9th goblin story, a beautiful girl
wants to select one from three candidates as her husband. They all have a
special talent in a career. In the end of the story, the King answers the
goblin that the girl should choose the warrior as he likes warriors.
I want to add some hero trait to my character, so Evan saved
the girl and accidently found why he became a dog. Then he will be involved in
a series of peculiar incidences.
My story will be continued next week. The
following plot will be based on what I will read in TWENTY-TWO GOBLINS.
Biography:
I really enjoyed your story but I found it to be really hard to follow. I think you should mention earlier on that he was switched with his dog. I had to read it a second time before I realized what was going on. Also, I got confused when you stated that “I do not want to be a human anymore!” If he didn't want to be human, then why was he worried about turning back into a dog at the end? I think this story would be really good if it was better explained.
ReplyDeleteHi Youhao,
ReplyDeleteI had to read through your story a couple of times to slightly grasp it. From what I did understand, the story is quite entertaining, and could have very good potential if I had a little more background to each of the characters. Towards the end I sort of got what was going on but, maybe I need to read the story that inspired this one to understand a little more.
Hi Youhao,
ReplyDeleteThe story was very good but I also had to read it a couple times to fully understand where it was going. I think that if you had a more clear introduction into what was happening with each character it would be easier to follow along. Starting straight into the burning car scene confused me because I was unsure who was doing the saving and the one being saved. Overall, the story line seems very unique and entertaining.